This is our first edit of ‘Restrained’.

We asked the class to give us detailed feedback based on the:

  • Mise-en-scene
  • Sound
  • Editing
  • Camera

These are the responses that we received:

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What we did well:

  • The makeup and the mise-en-scene
  • Good range of shots and angles
  • The acting was good
  • Fast paced editing created tension

Improvements that we need to make during our next editing session based on the feedback we received:

  • The audio could be improved or changes
  • Tighter editing
  • Some of the shots are a bit too shakey
  • Add titles
  • Frame some of the shots
  • Change the sound at the end of the sequence or remove it

 

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